To inherit my fathers fortune I need to be the eldest, yet my brother stands ahead of me. The money should belong to me, I deserve it, but he’s in the way. I need to cut him out so I can obtain my money. God please forgive me, mum look away, do not witness my pure sins.
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September 28, 2016 at 3:39 pm
I think this is great. Initially I thought you were saying that you thought Macbeth was Duncan’s son, then I realised you’d put the scene into a new context. The use of first person here is actually quite chilling. Nice work.