HWK4- Writing- Independent

It happened four years ago. I don’t know why? No one does. It just did. I don’t know how either. But it happened. I don’t think it meant something. Or did it? And most importantly, I don’t know why it happened to me. Out of all the people in the world, it had to happen to me. Why? How? Why me…

2 Comments

  1. Nice opening paragraph Aahnaf.

  2. this was a really good opening paragraph Aahnaf. i think you could improve it by giving less information on what happened. i would find it maore suspenceful if you said it happened a few years ago then it would leave people thinking when did it happen.

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