It happened four years ago. I don’t know why? No one does. It just did. I don’t know how either. But it happened. I don’t think it meant something. Or did it? And most importantly, I don’t know why it happened to me. Out of all the people in the world, it had to happen to me. Why? How? Why me…

February 9, 2015 at 9:38 pm
Nice opening paragraph Aahnaf.
March 12, 2015 at 5:25 pm
this was a really good opening paragraph Aahnaf. i think you could improve it by giving less information on what happened. i would find it maore suspenceful if you said it happened a few years ago then it would leave people thinking when did it happen.